Extract

Here's an extract* from my new project. I'm after feedback.

EXTRACT:

"The boy wore no trousers."

What do you think? Let me know. Writing, as the writers say, is rewriting. And I'm not going to write a bastard word further until I've nailed this opening sentence.

*In actual fact, this represents the entire project so far. I'm yet to decide upon a title, although I'm rather taken by 'The Sound and the Furry'.