Look upon my words, ye mighty, and despair.
Sunday, 1 May 2011
Here's an extract* from my new project. I'm after feedback.
"The boy wore no trousers."
What do you think? Let me know. Writing, as the writers say, is rewriting. And I'm not going to write a bastard word further until I've nailed this opening sentence.
*In actual fact, this represents the entire project so far. I'm yet to decide upon a title, although I'm rather taken by 'The Sound and the Furry'.
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